Harrison Butcher TS #13

For this Tutoring session, Maria and I continued to work on rewriting her essay.  This time, I had her outline the third paragraph using bullet points for her main topic and supporting paragraph.  For this paragraph we had to rework the main topic itself, as it was originally focused on two separate ideas. After we fixed this sentence, we continued to work on keeping the topic sentences relative to the topic as Maria researched and wrote about how Bilingualism can prevent one from being affected by Dementia and Alzheimer’s.  Maria often relies on her Spanish to fill in the blanks in her English knowledge, and though this can be useful I noticed some beautiful mistakes in her use of verb forms that definitely had a Spanish flavor. We worked on some of these verb forms as she wrote and eventually had a fully formed third paragraph.

December 7th 2018 at The Renegade Apartments

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