Harrison Butcher TS#9
For this tutoring session, Maria and I worked on reorganizing her essay so that the information in her topic paragraphs was all linked together. In order to accomplish this, we went through each paragraph and considered what each source added to the message. Maria is very passionate about the topic of her essay, as she is planning to return to Colombia to teach English to her own students. In order to make sure her essay made sense without compromising her message, I pointed out how certain out of place pieces of information seemed to relate to other unconnected topics in her essay. In addition to trimming this excess information down, Maria and I continued to work on her last topic paragraph. This required even more reading practice as we together analyzed the individual, corporate and national benefits to bilingualism. Furthermore, we continued to work on summarization and paraphrasing skills during this session.
December 3 2018 at Strozier Library
December 3 2018 at Strozier Library
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